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 1. LazyVim                                                   *LazyVim-lazyvim*
 
-Introducing LazyVim, a Neovim configuration that combines the benefits of a
-pre-made distro with the flexibility of building your own setup from scratch.
-Powered by lazy.nvim <https://github.com/folke/lazy.nvim>, LazyVim allows you
-to easily add, modify, or disable plugins as needed, all while enjoying the
-convenience of a pre-configured config. With LazyVim, you get the best of both
-worlds.
+LazyVim is a Neovim setup powered by lazy.nvim
+<https://github.com/folke/lazy.nvim> to make it easy to customize and extend
+your config. Rather than having to choose between starting from scratch or
+using a pre-made distro, LazyVim offers the best of both worlds - the
+flexibility to tweak your config as needed, along with the convenience of a
+pre-configured setup.
 
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